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    [Digimon Adventure] METAL EMPIRE

    I posted this on FanFiction.net, but I also narrated it on my YouTube channel. Here are both if you're interested in checking them out:

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1306451...e-METAL-EMPIRE

    Chapter 01: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o9yXpYBDbPc

    Chapter 02: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5s-3qL2ll2E

    If you notice any differences between my narrations and the written versions, it's because ongoing corrections and editions after the videos were posted on YouTube. In the future, I'll be posting the written portions ahead of time and then do a narrated version sometime after it's been edited by myself and any readers who happen upon errors and such. Enjoy and let me know if you have any questions or comments!
    Last edited by Cheeseknife; 09-16-2018 at 04:02 PM.

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    Posted the newest chapter; this one is a long one:

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1306451...e-METAL-EMPIRE

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    It looks good so far keep it up with new chapters

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    Quote Originally Posted by dgmn View Post
    It looks good so far keep it up with new chapters
    Will do my best.

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    Last edited by Cheeseknife; 10-03-2018 at 07:21 PM.

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    I've read the first two chapters and, so far, this is really good.

    I'll leave a more detailed review on FFN once I've read the rest.

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    Quote Originally Posted by wildwing64 View Post
    I've read the first two chapters and, so far, this is really good.

    I'll leave a more detailed review on FFN once I've read the rest.
    Great! I look forward to it. So far the reviews haven't been that detailed, and I'm constantly wondering about hindsight.

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    Just posted the newest chapter. I've given it a few looks, but am still concerned about grammar and such, so any reviews are welcome if you catch anything I've overlooked. Thanks!

    https://www.fanfiction.net/s/1306451...e-METAL-EMPIRE

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    Well I've noticed two: instead of 'should' add -er: shoulder ; and if I'm not mistaken wasn't it wash instead of washe

    It was a great chapter just wondering any plot progression with what happened to other Chosen next time.

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    Quote Originally Posted by dgmn View Post
    Well I've noticed two: instead of 'should' add -er: shoulder ; and if I'm not mistaken wasn't it wash instead of washe

    It was a great chapter just wondering any plot progression with what happened to other Chosen next time.
    Fixed those; more progression coming with Yamato's group in the next chapter.

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