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    Digimon Conquest: Kingdom Of The Order

    Digimon Conquest: Kingdom Of The Order is a fanfiction I have been planning for quite some time. It puts a spin on the classic Digimon formula, focusing on a character who befriends a group of digi-destined kids when he starts at a new school, but finds himself being treated as somewhat of an outsider in the group. The first chapter is due out relatively soon (and by that I mean somewhere in the ballpark of before Christmas), but I wanted to first post a short synopsis of the general plot to gauge what people think of the narrative.

    Synopsis;


    On the first day of term in a new school, Kazuo Oda finds himself with a group of like-minded friends who make him feel right at home. Not long after however, he begins to notice odd patterns in their behavior, as his new friends constantly exclude him from meetups and blow him off for seemingly no reason. One night, Kazuo is accidentally included in a group text between his new friends and some others that he has never met or heard of. Opting not to alert them to their mistake, he evesdrops and learns that they plan to meet up at the school that night, and so he decides to follow them, and perhaps confront them about their secrecy.

    Kazuo finds himself in a dark school building unable to locate his friends random electronics begin going off at random and strange noises and an eerie light draw him to the basement. It is there that he discovers his friends in the heat of a battle with strange and terrifying creatures, a battle that ultimately results in him and his friends being whisked away to another world through what can only be described as some kind of vortex, separating him from them in the process. He finds himself in a place called the Digital World, a reality seperate from ours but connected in many ways and inhabited by beings known as Digimon. Much of the Digital World is in a pseudo-militarized state under the tyranny of a group who call themselves The Order Of 'Mon, led by by their Lord; BlackWarGreymon. Searching for his friends, in the company of a Digimon named Guilmon, Kazuo discovers that The Order Of 'Mon is after somethings his friends have; a flashdrive that contains a program capable of turning anyone, human or digimon, into the ideal slave, and with it, they plan to take control over all of humanity and solidify their grip on the Digital World.

    Human Characters;

    -Kazuo ('Kaz') Oda [The New Kid In Town]

    -Miyo Nakajima [The Risk Taker]

    -Sachiko ('Sachi') Serizawa [The Brains]

    -Kenji Makuda [The Self-Proclaimed 'Cool Kid']

    -Nyoko Narumi [A Cyber P.I. Hired by Kenji's Father To Investigate A Suspected Digital Money Laundering Scheme]

    -Hajime Makuda [A Local Business Owner And Father Of Kenji. Suspects His Employees Of Participating In A Digital Money Laundering Scheme Through His Business Behind His Back]

    Digimon Partners;

    -Agumon ('August') [Partner To Miyo]

    -Elecmon ('Ell') [Partner To Sachiko]

    -DemiDevimon [Partner To Kenji]

    Other Digimon Characters;

    -Guilmon ('Red') [Ally, Rescuer Of Kazuo]

    -Lord-BlackWarGreymon [Lord And Leader Of The Order Of 'Mon]

    Progress

    -Arc 1; "New Friends, New World" (Outlined)
    > First Chapter (Outlined)
    > Second Chapter (Outlined)
    > Third Chapter (Outlined)

    -Arc 2; "The Village, The Lopmon, And The Field Of Sleeping Desire" (Being Outlined)
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    Sounds interesting. Just an observation that's driving me crazy... Kazuko is a girl's name and Gurezaki isn't a real surname.

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    Ooh sounds interesting! definitely something I would give a read to.

    But as Emperordramon said some things are a bit off...

    As a suggestion I believe it wouldn't be too crazy to have the protagonists not be in Japan if you don't want to deal with just japanese names. The digital world could technically be accessed from anywhere such as the US, Europe, South america, Mexico, Russia ETC. (I kind of did it myself for my one digimon AU where all the destined kids are from all over the globe)

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    I like the scenario, hope you post it on fanfiction or some other site, make sure you send us link

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    [QUICK UPDATE]:

    EDIT:
    Changed one character names, Mion Nakamura is now Miyo Nakajima (creative reasons). Currently outlining chapters 1-3 before penning the first full chapter. Still no ETA on Chapter 1, but hopefully it will be ready early fall.
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    Zuko also isn't a real name... which doesn't have to be a problem. But might I suggest Kazuki or Kazuo? They're both just one letter different from your original name. Kazuki means First Shine or Harmonious One and Kazuo means Harmonious Man.

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    Can't please everyone lol
    Last edited by Guilmonstrum; 08-29-2017 at 12:26 PM.

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    UPDATE

    I am modeling the flow of the story after the format of manga and anime, minus all of the useless filler.
    There will be a main story arc playing out through every chapter as well as several smaller story arcs that will
    generally last for 3 chapters.

    While the main story arc is pretty much completely planned out, I am still in the process of planning out the other story arcs that will play out. Currently, I am working on the first two story arcs;

    -Arc 1; "New Friends, New World"

    -Arc 2; "The Village, The Lopmon And The Field Of Sleeping Desire"

    The final draft of Arc 1, First Chapter will not be published until the first 3 story arcs are outlined (a total of about 9 chapters)
    The current main story will consist of 6 story arcs (roughly 18 chapters, depending, I am considering having the First and Final story arcs of this story to have 4 chapters instead of 3, so the number may rise to 20 chapters in total)

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