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« Reply #30 on: April 15, 2007, 05:14:07 AM »

Oh, nice ! This is going to be one hell of a fight. A Oity that Ivan didn“t do some of his comments.
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« Reply #31 on: May 07, 2007, 12:14:19 PM »

Well here is the ninth chapter/episode. I think this should leave about 11 or so more to go, since I think I'll just have 20-25 chapters total.

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EP 09: HyperKiller VS King Saver!

"Ikuto, where are you going?" Masaru asked as Ikuto started to wander off.

"I'll stop him!" Ikuto shouted as he continued off away from Masaru and the others.

"What's he talking about?"

"I think he's talking about the DigiKiller, after all, Ikuto was raised here, if DigiKiller did kill Mercurimon, well that's like killing one of Ikuto's adopted family members."

"But..."

"Let him be Masaru, we need to try and figure out what exactly that explosion was."

"What do you mean, we were supposed to find and stop DigiKiller weren't we?"

"Guys settle down! Ikuto can handle his own for now, we should find out if we have anyone else other than that DigiKiller person after us. If so I think we should try to deal with them first." Yoshino said as Touma calculated where the explosion would of sent their attackers.

"We should head this way, if we wish to find them, I don't know where they would of exactly landed, but I can figure out a direction." Touma said as he started to walk in the opposite direction of where Ikuto headed.

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"Look's like they want some more!" A voice called out as Masaru, Touma, and Yoshino entered a clearing after emerging from a small forest.

"Then we should teach them not to mess with us." Another voice said as three figures stood up in the middle of the clearing.  One was a blond haired girl with a black dress, and an umbrella,  another was a large guy with white hair, and a dark colored shirt. The third, who appeared to be their leader, was a blond haired guy wearing a blue and yellow shirt.

"Change, Bio Thunder!" The blond male shouted as his Digivice shot out from his sleeve. When the light had died down he was wearing a blue outfit with yellow lightning like markings on it. He had a red helmet with a mask like design, and a lightning shaped horn protruding. His gloves had talon like blades on it.

"Change, Bio Saurus!" The other guy said as he did the same thing. The end result was a large green figure with orange markings, and a red stegosaurus like helmet.

"Change, Bio Coatl!" The only female of the group said as she transformed. Where she stood was a figure in white, with yellow stripes, and a red snake head helmet.

"Your the ones who attacked us!" Masaru shouted as he ran towards them preparing to hit one of them.

"Thunder Storm!" BioThunder shouted as he fired a blast of electricity from his hands, aimed directly at Masaru. Masaru jumped at the right time and slammed his fist into Bio Thunder's helmet summoning his DigiSoul.

"Touma, Yoshino." Masaru shouted as he held up he turned to them with his DigiSoul covering his entire body.

"Right." They said as their DigiSouls did the same thing.

"Change DigiSoul, Full Charge!" They all shouted in unison as they instantly transformed to their Digiranger forms, and summoned their newest weapons, at the same time.

"Digiranger of Fire, DigiOrange!" DigiOrange shouted as he took aim with the Rising Revolver.

"Digiranger of Wind, DigiBlue!" DigiBlue called out as he readied to slam his fists into an enemy.

"Digiranger of Nature, DigiPink!" DigiPink said as she raised her Lila Shield.

"Dennoujuu  Sentai Digiranger!" They all shouted before they started their attack.

"Needle Rain!" BioSaurus shouted as he pulled out his shield and started to fire the blades at the Digirangers.

"Freeze Wave!" BioCoatl shouted as she released wave of freezing energy which caught DigiBlue, and DigiPink.

"Trident Blast!" DigiOrange shouted as he fired several blasts at the BioKillers, hitting BioThunder, and BioSaurus.

The three BioKillers looked at each other, then at the Digirangers and nodded. "Hyper Change!" The three of them shouted. Their bodies started to glow, then grow and change shape. BioThunder became a large blue bird, BioCoatl became a large serpent, and BioSaurus took on the form of a stegosaurus.

"They are as big as the Savers, how is that possible?" DigiBlue said as he stared at them.

"This is the Worst!" DigiPink said with her hand on her head, as soon as the freeze wave had worn off.

"Geo Saver!"

"Gaoga Saver!"

"Sun Saver!"

The Digirangers shouted as they summoned their Savers. The Geo Saver fired a large fireball from it's mouth, at Hyper Thunder. DigiBlue had his Gaoga Saver target Hyper Coatl, and DigiPink's Sun Saver attacked the Hyper Stego.

"Hyper Gattai!" The Bio Killers shouted as their Hyper forms combined. The Hyper Thunder became the chest, Hyper Coatl became the arms, and Hyper Stego became the waist and legs. The heads of the Hyper Thunder and Hyper Stego combined to form the head of the Hyper Killer.

"Hyper Killer! Combination complete!" Their voices called out in unison as the Hyper Killer struck its pose.

"King Formation" The Digirangers quickly followed their opponent's lead and formed the King Saver.

"Hyper Destroyer!" The Hyper Killer raised an arm and summoned a large lightning bolt shaped sword, gathering energy in it before charging at the King Saver.

"King Slash!" The Digirangers shouted as they called on their large blade, and proceeded to bring it down on the Hyper Killer.

The two attacks connected at the same time. The King Saver was thrown back, and separated, while the Hyper killer was barely moved at all. The Digirangers were tossed from the King Saver in the process and the Hyper Killer was ready to attack again.
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« Reply #32 on: May 08, 2007, 09:46:27 AM »

Ah, the Classic "Enemy Mecha is too strong and kicks Rangers out of the Cockpit". Nice done !
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« Reply #33 on: May 31, 2007, 10:29:11 PM »

Well, I'll have the next chapter up sometime before the end of the first week of June. I've got the stuff I was trying to figure out taken care of, so now its just getting everything to fit together.
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« Reply #34 on: June 27, 2007, 07:46:24 AM »

Well here it is, Episode 10 of Dennoujuu Sentai Digiranger. However first, I've got a few things to show off, they are located in this thread here.


EP 10: Elite Saver Appears.

    As the Hyper Killer prepared to attack a second time, the Digirangers laid helpless, in their civilian forms still stunned from being tossed from the King Saver. The Hyper Killer raised its foot, and just as it was about to step on Masaru and the others, a blast came from no where knocking it backwards.


    "Looks like I'm just in time!" A familiar voice called out from on top of the large black crow that had just come into view.

    "Ikuto!" Masaru said as he slowly got up to his feet and reached for his Digivice.

    "Don't move, we'll take care of this one." a voice said, as both Satsuma and Yushima stepped into view.

    "Digisoul, Change!" The two of them said in unison, as they summoned their DigiSouls, and connected them with their Digivices.

    Yushima's out fit was black, with green boots, green gloves, a green chest plate, and other padding. His chest plate had a black and red DATS logo on it, the neck and belt of his suit were red, and his visor was a black oval.

    Satsuma's outfit was also black, yet his armor was mainly crimson in color. His chest plate had a one and what looked to be an incomplete infinity symbol on it. The stripe that created the number one on his chest plate continued down his outfit. The only place the DATS logo was on his uniform was the belt buckle. At his side was his personal side arm, the Reppa Blade. His visor was not one visor but rather two smaller visors which resembled stylized markings on a mask.

    "Digiranger of the Sea, DigiGreen!" Yushima said as he struck his pose.

    "The Slicing Whirlwind of Justice! DigiMaster!" Satsuma said as he held his Digivice out in front of him.

    "Captain?" Masaru said in a puzzled tone as their boss stood in front of the HyperKiller, wearing a black and red outfit.

    "Take you Savers and get out of here, the three of us can handle these guys." DigiGreen said as he pulled out his Digivice.

    "But how?"

    "Sun Saver, Digitize!" Yoshino said as she aimed the back of her Digivice at her fallen machine, and it was sucked in. With both Tohma and Masaru following her lead.

    "Let's go!" Yoshino shouted as she took off away from the battle.

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    "Why did we we have to run?"

    "Masaru, we couldn't fight them in our current condition, we had no choice."

    "She's right, plus we had to protect the Digi-Cores of our Savers."

    "Digiwhat?"

    "The Digi- Core is the power source of our Savers. With out it the Saver can not function, no matter what."

    "A Saver requires two things, one is a Digi-Core, and a DigiSoul. The Digi-Core, well its the heart of the Saver, with out it a Saver can't function, and the Digisoul is what gives it energy."

    "So, why couldn't we just summon our Digisouls, and recharge them?"

    "Masaru, even if we did that, before we could get them to fighting shape, the Hyper Killer would of attacked us, its easier to restore them while they are in the Digivice, there they will slowly regain their energy. Plus if we aren't around the enemy, we can safely come up with a plan for next time." Tohma said as he sat down on a rock.

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    DigiMaster reached for his Reppa Blade, and when he grabbed it it sprung to life, and the blade became jagged. In one hand he held his Digivice, and in the other, his Reppa Blade. A light shot from his Digivice, and a small eye appeared in the middle of the blade.

    DigiGreen simply held out his Digivice, as it erupted in a bright green light, and turned into a staff with a crescent blade on one end, and a Gatling barrel on the other.

    "Qilin Saver!" DigiMaster shouted as he made a cutting motion with his Reppa Blade, as he did so a dark red energy wave shot threw the air, and started to spin.

    "Shawujin Saver!" DigiGreen shouted as he fired several green blasts from his weapon into the sky.  The blasts all seemed to explode in the same spot and a large green circle appeared, similar to the portals that the other Digiranger's summon their Savers from.

    With in the red whirlwind that Digimaster created a small white fox like creature appeared and suddenly changed its form into what resembled a small horse like creature covered in armor, and had a pair of small white wings. The creature started to emerge form the whirlwind, and as it did so it became much larger, and took a metalic appearance.

    With in the green circle a small green turtle appeared for a second before it turned int to a green scaled humanoid creature. The green figure dropped through the whole in the sky and grew just like the creature that DIgimaster summoned.

    The two newest Digirangers glanced at each other before jumping on to their respective Savers. DigiGreen tossed his weapon into the air and it enlarged itself for the Shawujin Saver to use it as a weapon.

    "Ikuto, lets stop them." DigiMaster said as his Qilin Saver flew next to the Yatagara Saver.

    "Right!"

    "Elite Formation!" All three shouted in unison before dropping into the cockpits. Yatagara Saver's wings, and head detached revealing a hand. Qilin Saver's legs folded into its body, it's wings detached, and the mouth opened to reveal a hand. The two then attached to Shawujin Saver, after its arms folded into the body, Qilin Saver forming the right arm, and Yatagara Saver forming the left.. The wings from the Yatagara Saver attached to the back, while the wings from the Qilin Saver attached to the legs. The head of the Yatagara Saver opened up and slid onto the head of the Shawujin Saver.

    "Elite Saver, Formation Complete!" The three of them said as they rushed towards the Hyper Killer.

    "Kouyoujyou Shippuu Tenshou Ken" DigiMaster and DigiGreen shouted in unison as the horn from the Qilin Saver attached to the center of the Gatling end of Shawujin Savers staff. The Elite Saver slammed the horn into the Hyper Killer and quickly began to fire blasts from the Gatling gun at the enemy.

    The Hyper Killer was caught of guard by the immense speed, of the Elite Saver, and were unable to get in an attack before they were impaled by the weapon. The attack separated the three BioKillers, who then reverted to human form and ran off.

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    "The DigiCore is found in both Digimon, and the DigiSavers. Me and Yushima figured out how to extract the power of the DigiCore, and safely turn a Digimon into a machine."

    "However, our savers have their limitations, one of which is a time limit. They can only be in Saver time for ten minutes. Summoning their Saver form greatly drains our Digimon, however, the four of you are much different." Yushima said.

    "We don't have partners like you do we, instead our partner's Digi-tamas were used directly to create our Savers. But what about Ikuto, I mean he wasn't in the human world, and his Saver seems more powerful than ours, why is that?"

    "Yes, Ikuto's saver wasn't created by us, I don't know where his came from. However the three of your savers were created using Digi-tamas that came to the human world. We were simply scanning their data, and planned on replicating it to create the Savers." Satsuma said as he let his Digimon out of his Digivice, and let it rest on his shoulder.

    "Unfortunately, something went wrong, and the DigiTamas were destroyed, we were able to salvage the DigiCore from within each DigiTama, and utilized our technology to create the Savers, and your respective Digivices." Yushima explained as his partner, Kamemon, gave everyone a cup of tea.

    "So what about Miki and Megumi, they are Digirangers as well, do they have their partners, or are they like us?" Tohma asked.

    "Their partners are PawnChessmon, and they are a bit different from us, you see the two of us were the first to receive our partners, however it wasn't until recently that we created our suits. You see, Miki and Megumi, with out us knowing exactly what they were doing were not only maintaining your Savers, but studying the information on your suits, and your Savers."

    "So, Captain Satsuma, they were the ones who inspired you to create your Savers?"

    "No, they didn't have Savers then, however, we have had our savers longer than you guys, however like we said, yours were created from DigiTamas, ours were created from our own Digimon. Our suits were recently created, due to the fact that Kurata showed up as DigiKiller. We felt we had no choice but to join in on the fight, and we also used the same method we used to create our Savers, to give the ability to both of the Pawn Chessmon."
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« Reply #35 on: June 27, 2007, 12:12:00 PM »

Yahoo!  Didn't quite expect you'd use "DigiMaster", but still kicks serious ass! \^0^/  Nice touch with the 20X-series Digivice-holders to be able to gattai, too. Cheesy

By the way... I saw the pixel art you did on dA, and I'm glad I was able to see them so I could make these for you:

I haven't started on DigiBlack yet, but I plan to once you get more of them up and out there.  I look forward to it, though!
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« Reply #36 on: June 27, 2007, 01:44:43 PM »

Nice Chapter ! Very interesting. Also nice Art.  Now I know what I forgot.
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« Reply #37 on: July 13, 2007, 10:13:17 PM »

Well guess what, I finished the 11th Chapter/Episode, well maybe its kinda rushed, but I just started typing and it seemed to flow, I personally like how I set it up for the next chapter.

Well anyways, here's Episode 11.
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Ep 11: A new weapon? DigiSoul Slash!


    "We're not far from Jureimon's forest, he might be able to help us." Ikuto said as he lead the group towards the forest that they first met each other in.

    "So do you really think we'll be able to find Kurata that easily?" Masaru asked as the got even closer to the forest.

    "He's got an army of artificial Digimon, plus he seems to fancy killing Digimon, that's not someone that would blend in to well here in the Digital World." Tohma said as he he suddenly pushed everyone to the side and a green blast hit the ground beside them.

    DigiKiller had appeared emerged from the forest and attacked them.

    "Kurata, why are you doing this?" Satsuma asked as he stepped forward and pulled out his Digivice.

    "Digimon are dangerous monsters, they don't deserve to live!" Kurata shouted as he fired a couple more shots at the group before pulling out his strange Digivice and summoned a single Gizmon XT, and about a dozen GizmonAT. "Now you can help me destroy them, or be destroyed by my creations!"

    "DigiSoul, change!" All of the Digirangers except for Masaru, who rushed the Gizmon trying to land a punch, summoned their Digisouls and transformed. Right as Masaru was about to punch a Gizmon, Kurata's three followers jumped in the way, and transformed into their Bio forms.

    "DigiSoul, change!" Masaru shouted as noticed that he made contact with Ivan and managed to summon his Digisoul.

    "Digiranger of Fire, DigiOrange!"

    "Digiranger of Wind, DigiBlue!"
   
    "Digiranger of Nature, DigiPink!"

    "Digiranger of the Shadows, DigiPurple!"

    "Digiranger of the Sea, DigiGreen!"

    "The Slicing Whirlwind of Justice! DigiMaster!"

    "Dennoujuu Sentai Digiranger!" They shouted in unison before they summoned their weapons and started to fight the Gizmon, BioKillers, and DigiKiller.

    DigiOrange proceeded to focus on fighting Bio Thunder. DigiBlue was squaring off against Bio Coatl, and Bio Saurus challenged DigiPink.  DigiPurple headed straight for DigiKiller, with the soul thought of revenge on his mind.

    "Reppa Blade, Halbred Mode!" DigiMaster shouted as he pulled out his Reppa Blade and his Digivice then a light shot from his Digivice into his Reppa Blade. The Blade opened up into jagged blade, and the handle extended forming something that looked more like a Halberd than a sword.

    "Kouyoujou!" DigiGreen said as he held out his Digivice and it turned into his staff.

    "We'll handle the Digimon, everyone else just focus on your enemy!" DigiMaster said as he and DigiGreen attacked. DigiMaster sliced a couple GizmonAT in half, while DigiGreen blasted a few with the Gatling, and removed the wings of a couple others with his blade.

    "Digisoul, Full Charge!" DigiOrange, DigiBlue, and DigiPink shouted in unison as they summoned their weapons.

    "Trident..." DigiOrange aimed his Rising Revolver at Bio Thunder, only for Bio Thunder to grab it and use his Thunderstorm to send DigiOrange flying backwards.

    "Tornado Punch!" DigiBlue shouted as he hit Bio Coatl with a blast of wind from his large gloves.

    "Freezing Wave!" Bio Coatl shouted as she grabbed onto DigiBlue and released a blast of freezing energy, encasing his legs in a block of ice.

    "Needle Rain!" Bio Saurus shouted as he fired blades from his shield at DigiPink, who raised her Lila Shield, but the blades ripped through and pinned her to the ground.

    "Boomerang Blade!" Ikuto shouted as he fired the energy blades from his weapon at DigiKiller.

    "Shinkuu Kamaitachi!" Digimaster shouted as he swung his blade at the remaining Gizmon destroying each one of them with a blade of wind that flew forth.

    "Thunder...."

    "Freezing...."

    "Needle...."

    "I don't think so!" DigiMaster shouted as he shortened the handle of his weapon and threw it into the air, it then shot forward and started to attack the Bio Killers all by its self.

    "Kouyoujou: Waterfall Formation!" DigiGreen shouted as he slammed his staff into the ground and a blast of watter shot up from under DigiBlue and DigiPink freeing them in the process.

    "Hyper Change!" The BioKillers shouted as they started to transform.

    The Digirangers looked at each other and raised their hands to the sky. "Digi Savers, King Formation!" The three of them shouted as they summoned Geo Saver, Gaoga Saver, and Sun Saver, and had them combine to form King Saver.
   
    "Hyper Gattai!" The Hyper Killers shouted as they combined to form Hyper Killer.

    "You three don't learn do you, you lost last time we fought, and you'll loose this time."

    "I don't think so. King Saber!" DigiOrange shouted as the King Saver's double bladed weapon.

    "Hyper Destroyer!" The Hyper Killer shouted in a mix of all three Bio Killer voices as it summoned its weapon and launched its attack.

    "King Slash!" The Digirangers shouted as the blades made contact.

    "We will not loose a second time!" DigiOrange shouted.

    "They're to powerful" DigiBlue said. "We, aren't even fast enough to hit any weak spot they might have."

    "And our shields can't stop them."

    "A man doesn't give up!" DigiOrange shouted as his DigiSoul suddenly burst forth from his body with enough force to shatter his visor. As this happened the King Saber started to glow orange.

    "He's right , we won't loose with out giving it all, even if the stakes are against us!" DigiBlue shouted as his DigiSoul also erupted from his body, and caused a blue glow to be added to the King Saber, and his visor also shattered.

   "This is the Worst, but I'm not going to just surrender!" DigiPink shouted as her DigiSoul also erupted from her, shattering the visor, and adding a pink glow to the King Saber.

    "King Saber, Full Power!" They shouted in Unison as they raised the blade and the King Saver Jumped into the air. "DigiSoul SLASH!" They shouted in unison as they brought the blade down, breaking the Hyper Destroyer in half. Then a large explosion resulting from the excessive amount of energy with in the blade, sent both the King Saver, and Hyper Killer flying in opposite directions.

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    "That was amazing, how did you manage to do that?" Ikuto asked after they all regrouped within Jureimon's foest, with no sign of Jureimon anywhere.

    "I don't know, I just didn't want to loose to them." Masaru said as he stared at his Digivice with it's cracked screen.

    "I'm just glad that the DigiCore that was with in your Savers managed to return to the Digivices before the screens shattered." Kudamon said from Satsuma's neck.

    "But with out these we can't transform, DigiKiller, and those other three are still out there!"

    "There is only one solution I can think of. There is a place the three of you must go alone. Hopefully you'll be able to repair your Digivices when you get there." Satsuma said.

    "The three of us should be able to handle Kurata and his lackeys for a short while at least." Yushima said.

    "There should be a small house not far from here according to Ikuto. He said he's noticed it several times when wandering this forest. If our beliefs are correct, well there is someone there that can help." Satsuma said as Ikuto pointed them in the direction of the house.
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« Reply #38 on: July 15, 2007, 07:14:19 AM »

Nice Chapter ! So I guess that the Big Upgrade of the Savers will come in the next one.
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« Reply #39 on: August 04, 2007, 08:03:18 PM »

Well here is the 12th chapter, the only reason it took so long was I had to figure out a transformation call for their upgrade. Of course i was undecided until I looked at the latest Next raws.


Edit: Just now noticed I miss read what the Katakana near the end of Next battle 20, but I simply added an n on accident, but ohwell, even if I had noticed in the first place, I'd still would of used what I did, since well it fits.
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Ep 12: Training begins, Master the DigiSoul!


    "So do you really think our Digivices can be fixed?"

    "Of course they can be fixed. The real question is can whoever we are trying to find fix them?" Touma said as they continued through the forest.

    "We have to believe in them, after all if we waste any time, and the BioKillers attack..."

    "That would be the worst." Yoshino said interrupting Masaru as they neared the edge of the forest and exited to find a small dojo.

    "Is that the house? It looks more like a dojo." Masaru said as he stared at it.
   
    "Who are you three, and why are you here?" A strange voice said as a humanoid Lion Digimon stepped out of the dojo.

    "We were sent here to find someone capable of repairing our Digivices" Yoshino answered.

    "Let me ask you something, what is the DigiSoul to you?"

    "What do you mean?"

    "What is the DigiSoul to you? I don't think it's that hard of a question to answer."

    "Why does it matter what they are to us, right now we need to get our Digivices repaired."

    "Follow me!" The Digimon said as he stepped into his dojo.

    "Who is he?" Masaru asked Touma who had his DigiWindow.

    "Bantyo Leomon, an Ultimate level Digimon."

    Once inside the dojo, Bantyo Leomon proceeded to tell them that they needed to learn what the DigiSoul is, and that inorder to truly do so they would need to train.

    "We just need our Digivices repaired, we don't need any training." Masaru said annoyed at how Bantyo Leomon seemed to be ignoring the fact that they were only interested in repairing their Digivices.

    "In order to gain mastery over the Digisoul you'll have to beable to call on it, and focus it. Try to completely destroy these wooden figures." Bantyo Leomon said as several wooden figures came to life and started to attack Masaru.

    "I don't see where this is going to help us at all."

    "You don't understand because you have no idea what the DigiSoul is."

    "So how is destroying wooden figures..."

    "If you don't know how to properly control your DigiSoul, then there is no use in repairing your Digivice because it will only break again."

    "Fine then!" Touma said as he summoned his DigiSoul and proceeded to try and destroy some of the Yoshino merely sat on the sidelines seeing no real point in this training method.

    "Though your fists are strong, one needs more to control a Digisoul." BantyoLeomon said as Masaru and Touma continued their training.

    Each time they knocked one of the wooden figures down it just got back up again. "Concentrate, put all of your emotions in to your fist."

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    Outside the dojo the BioKillers had appeared, already in their Bio forms. BioThunder proceeded to focus his Thunderstorm attack at the building, while BioSaurus used his Needle Rain attack, and BioCoatl used her freezing wave.

    After a few attacks the building exploded, however none of the attacks were able to penetrate a barrier with in the dojo, which protected those with in.

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    "We can't just stay here and let them wreck the Digital World, we need to fight!" Masaru shouted when he noticed their rivals outside.

    "You aren't ready, you haven't finished your training, so I can't let you leave."

    "What do you mean, how can we possibly defeat these wooden figures they keep popping back up each time we knock them down!" Masaru shouted as his energy burst through his body. He swung his fist hard into one of the figures, and knocked it across to the other side of the room, only for it to get back up and head straight for him again.

    "You almost had it, just a little further and you'll be able to do it Masaru."

    "Why are you so insistant that we destroy these figures."

    "If you don't then how do you hope to ever find your father!" Bantyo Leomon shouted, causing Masaru to get worked up, and his energy exploded from his body as he slammed his fist into a Wooden figure once more causing to to shatter to small splinters.

    "And Touma, I'm sure there is someone you wish to save. If you loose, who's to say you'll be able to save them. The stronger you are, the more power you'll have to protect, and save those around you!"

    With this Touma swung one final punch with all his force shattering the second wooden figure. Yoshino was the only one left to complete the training, however she didn't even move. As the final figure came towards her, she doubled up her fist, closed her eyes and punched it once, causing it to shatter.

    "Yoshino, how'd you..."

    "I observed the two of you, and watched listened to Bantyo Leomon's messages. Plus I didn't waste my energy trying to destroy them."

    "Yes the three of you have finished the training. You should now understand that the Digisoul is pure human emotion. And that those who have a purpose, are stronger than those who do not." Bantyo Leomon said.

    "But what about our Digivices?" Yoshino asked.

    "You already have what is needed to repair them." Bantyo Leomon said as he proceeded to lower the barrier.

    The three Digirangers stepped out of the dojo and pulled out their Digivices before summoning their DigiSouls, and channeling them into it. When the light died down they were holding new devices. Masaru and Touma's were primarily black with a stripe that matched the main color of their original Digivice, and Yoshino's was white with a pink stripe.

    "DigiSoul Charge!" They shouted as they transformed.

    "Do they really think they can stop us?" Bio Thunder said as he rushed the Digirangers.

    "Burst Change!" The Digirangers shouted as they summoned their Ultimate DigiSouls and channeled it into their Digivice Bursts. A bright light erupted from the Digivice and engulfed them.

To Be Continued....
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« Reply #40 on: August 20, 2007, 11:02:09 PM »

Well here is the 13th chapter, rather short but I think it does the trick of introducing the power up.

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Ep 13: Burst Change! Power of the Ultimate DigiSoul!

"Burst Change!" the Digirangers shouted as they channeled their newly mastered DigiSouls into the Digivice Bursts. As they did so a bright light engulfed each of them, their helmets vanished and their suits started to change. The symbol that was on their chests was replaced by three slanted shapes which resembled the buttons on the Burst. A black striped formed under the neck of Masaru and Touma's outfit, and a white one appeared on Yoshino's. the stripe went from the left shoulder accross to the right, down the right side to the waist, and then crossing back to the left before going down the leg. The right arms of the new uniforms also matched the color of the stripe. Then their boots changed color, DigiOrange's became red, DigiPink's became black, and DigiBlue's became dark blue. A metal cuff appeared on their boots, and on their wrists, with a single colored stripe matching their main color in the center. the new gloves stopped at the wrist cuffs, and then round buckles appeared on their belts, and the suit was finished off by new helmets.

"Shining Digiranger of Fire, Digi ShineOrange!"

"Illusionary Digiranger of the Wind, Digi MirageBlue!"

"Blooming Digiranger of Nature, Digi RosePink!"

"Dennoujuu Sentai Digiranger!" They shouted as they struck their poses.

"Do you think just because you have a new outfit that you'll be able to beat us?" BioThunder asked as he prepared to attack.

"It's more than a new outfit, it's a whole new power!" Digi ShineOrange shouted as he pounded his fist into his hand.

"Thunderstorm!" BioThunder shouted as he launched his attack at ShineOrange.

"Is that all you got?"ShineOrange shouted as he dodged the attack.

"Shine Sword!" ShineOrange shouted as he summoned his new weapon, a large double ended blade weapon, with a sun like shape for a handle.

"Mirage Claws!" MirageBlue said as he called on his new weapons, a pair of blue clawed weapons.

"Rose Whip!" RosePink called out as she summoned her weapon.

"Needle Rain!" BioSaurus shouted as he held up his shield and fired a large amount of blades at RosePink.

"Freezing Wave!" BioCoatl called out as she attacked MirageBlue.

"Gale Claw!" MirageBlue shouted as he swung one of his claws releasing a burst of energy causing BioCoatl's attack to be deflected.

"Ivy Hug!" RosePink called out as she touched the ground with her rose whip and it shot into it. Infront of her a wall of vines shot out from the ground to block BioSaurus' Needle Rain.

"You are stronger before, oh well, we'll crush you anyways!" BioThunder shouted as his digivice slid into his hand.

"Hyper Change!" the three BioKillers shouted as they turned into their Hyper forms.

"Look's like we need something bigger." ShineOrange said as his Digivice Burst.

"No, we don't need to waste our power, we can take them out with a single unified attack." MirageBlue said glancing at the others' weapons.

"How?" RosePink asked as the Hyper forms of the BioKiller's combined into the HyperKiller.

"By destroying their power source!"

"You mean..."

"Exactly!" MirageBlue said as he tossed his claws into the air and ShineOrange held his Sword out. The claws connected to gether to form a bow like shape after the claws extended, then RosePink's whip retracted into it's handle and connected the newly formed Mirage bow to the Shine Sword.

ShineOrange held the weapon in front of him, and the blades of the sword started to spin. He jumped into the air, as the Hyper Killer summoned it's Hyper Destroyer.

"Burst Shot!" ShineOrange shouted as he launched his attack from the air, aiming the powerful shot at the Hyper Killer. The Blades that had been spinning had channeled the energy into both the Mirage Bow, and the Rose Whip, which had then launched their own attacks, resulting in a powerful blast of energy from the three weapons, which shattered the tubes which protruded from the back of the Hyper Killer causing a large explosion, and sending the Bio Killers through the air.

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"Your new power is great, however you can't afford to become to cocky. After all, you still have limits." Bantyo Leomon said as the Digirangers rested after their battle.

"You should head in the direction of the Holy Capital, I'm sure that your friends are also heading their, it should be a good place for you to regroup." Bantyo Leomon said as he pointed out the direction they should head.

"How do you know that where they are headed?" Masaru asked.

"Because, I know that is where I would go if I wanted to regroup with them." Bantyo Leomon said as he walked off.
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« Reply #41 on: August 21, 2007, 05:04:50 AM »

Cool!! Man, you're great!!: As a result, I will gift to you the Digirangers in a ranger format called "ACATL"!!
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« Reply #42 on: August 21, 2007, 06:09:08 AM »

Very nice re-imagine of the Ultimate Level Debut !
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« Reply #43 on: September 17, 2007, 10:52:08 PM »

Well here is another short chapter, Originally it was going to introduce one of the Killer forms for the bio Killers, and one of the Kaisers for the Digirangers but I opted to wait on that, so those will appear next chapter, might combine two episodes for Ep 15 of my fic. And two for Ep 16 that way I can avance a bit quicker through the DigiKiller arc, since there are only a few more battles in it.

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Ep 14: The Holy Capital attacked, Kurata's army appears.

The BioKillers were in tubes that were being filled with a strange gas. Kurata stood at the control panel as he filled the tubes with the gas. Three Digimon could be seen on the monitor in front of him. One looked like a dinosaur, another resembled a woman in a dress, and the third appeared to look like a dragon man.

" How could you possibly loose to them?" Kurata shouted at them as their tubes filled. He didn't expect them to answer. "I had given you the ability to fight them, you let your guard down, and because of that you let them defeat you! This time that better not happen!"

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"So Touma, what do you think  this Holy capital looks like?"

"It's probably full of holy digimon, such as Kudamon, Angemon, and Angewomon." Touma said as he looked through a list of Digimon with his Digi Window.

"It's probably rather large, I doubt we'd be able to miss it." Yoshino said as they continue to walk. They finally came across a large lake, with no visable way across, while looking around they noticed a large castle not to far away, and it seemed to be getting closer to them.

"Is that castle moving?" Masaru asked as he stared at it.

"It looks like it, but that isn't possible." Touma said as he looked around to find a path around the lake.

They continued to search for another way down, but after about half an hour came to the conclusion that they must of missed another path somewhere, by time they returned to where they had stopped, and decided to back track they noticed that the castle they had seen earlier was moving, because it was now right next to where they were when they first spotted it.

"It's a Digimon, with a city on its back." Masaru said surprised at the sight before him.

"Eldoradimon to be precise." Touma said as he glanced at his Digi Window, "and the city on his back is.... the holy capital!"

"So we made it then, we made it to where we were supposed to." Masaru said as he jumped straight onto the back of the Digimon, and was seized by the digimon who lived there. The other two were also captured.

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They must of been knocked out because when they came to they had been tied to stakes in the middle of a large room.

"I see you three are awake now, not sure where Satsuma and Ikuto are though, they said they had something to do and we separated before I got here." A familiar voice said to the three of them, when they tried to find the voice they noticed it was Yushima,who was also tied to a stake.

"Yushima, what are you doing here? Why are we...."

"Ah, they aren't very fond of humans here, I don't blame them either, especially with Kurata and those other three causing trouble in the digital world."

"So why didn't you explain that we don't mean any harm."

"It's simple, they don't trust anyone. And just because you claim to not mean any harm, doesn't make it so."

"Well, what are they going to do with us?" Touma asked, and right after he did so a steel gate opened and in marched a Cerberumon.

"This is the worst!" Yoshino said as the perfect level digimon ran at them ready to attack.

"I've got this one!" Masaru shouted as he some how managed to break free from the ropes that held him. He then kicked off of the stake that he was tied to and flew towards Cerberumon slamming his fist in to the digimon's head, releasing his Digisoul.

"Cerberumon, stop!" a masked Digimon shouted when he saw the orange energy that was around Masaru's fist.

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"So you're saying that someone else passed through not to long ago, and possessed a similar ability?" Masaru asked.

"Not similar, the same. it was during a drought and he was able to use it to bring water to the surface." The masked Digimon, Baronmon said.

Baronmon, Yushima, Touma, and Masaru all talked about their quest, and the stranger who had also possessed a Digisoul. However, before they could find out to much about the individual a Digimon came running in, a large number of Gizmon XT had appeared and had started to attack the castle.

Masaru and the others glanced at each other, before they all stood up and rushed out with their Digivices in hand. Once outside they noticed a huge number of Gizmon XT had arrived. However, as they summoned their Digisoul's and prepared to transform, several blades flew through the air hitting the Gizmon. Both shuriken, and boomerang blades were flying through the air as Igamon seemed to appear out of no where, along with DigiPurple flying into battle on his Saver.

"Ikuto!" Masaru shouted as he glanced up.

"What are you waiting for, you don't expect me to take them all on by my self do you?"

"Digisoul, Burst Change!" Masaru, Touma, and Yoshino all shouted in unison as they transformed straight into their newest forms.

"Digisoul Change!" Yushima shouted after Kamemon returned to his iC.

"Shining Digiranger of Fire, Digi ShineOrange!"

"Illusionary Digiranger of the Wind, Digi MirageBlue!"

"Blooming Digiranger of Nature, Digi RosePink!"

"Digiranger of the Sea, DigiGreen!"

"Dennoujuu Sentai Digiranger!" They shouted as they immediately launched into battle with the Gizmon XT. The Igamon were being defeated left and right, they stood no real chance against the Perfect level artificial Digimon which were attacking the city.

"Masaru, we need to take out as many as we can in a single blast, if we try to take them out one by one, they will easily over power us, however if we hit them all at once..."

"Ikuto, Old Man, draw their fire!" ShineOrange shouted as he summoned his Shine Sword.

"Mirage Claws, Bow mode!" MirageBlue called out summoning his weapon.

"Rose Whip!" RosePink said as she summoned her weapon, and they proceeded to combine them like they had done to defeat the Hyper Killer. DigiGreen was already blasting away at the Gizmon with his staff, and DigiPurple was using both his Boomerang,and his Saver to thin the army out.

As the newly formed weapon charged the Gizmon were effectively unware of it, until the last second when their two attackers ceased their attack and moved out of the way. ShineOrange stood on top of the Holy Capital, and aimed the weapon at the thinned out army. "Burst Shot!" he cried out as he let out the blast of energy that ripped through the Gizmon, destroying around ninety percent of them, with the surviving ones quickly retreating.

"They'll be back, and I'm sure they won't let you pull that off again. After all, they aren't going to make the same mistake twice." Yushima said after he had reverted to normal and headed inside with Ikuto.
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« Reply #44 on: October 27, 2007, 04:31:30 PM »

Ep 15: Whips and Blades, New giants appear!

Masaru, Yoshino, and Touma sat at a table across from Ikuto and Yushima. "I have a feeling that things aren't going to get easier while we are here, we should perform patrols to keep an eye out for any more Gizmon, DigiKiller, or his three subordinates." Touma suggested.

"So how should we divide up the city?" Yoshino asked.

"I'll take the area around the lake. Yoshino you have the town, and Masaru, you will handle the towers."

"Touma, who do you think you are trying to give me orders. And what are they supposed to do?"

"Ikuto just helped to save us, and we can't have Yushima trying to stop the enemy, especially alone, we need to wait for Satsuma to get here, after all the three of them can form the Elite Saver."

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Touma had started his patrol of the lake shore, when he heard a feminine voice. He carefully tried to sneak up on it, only to find Nanami, one of Kurata's three subordinates, BioCoatl.

"I heard you approach, so there is no reason for you to try and hide." she said as she turned towards the tree that Touma was standing behind.

"What are you doing here, why are you hurting innocent digimon?"

"They are of no concern to me, I am merely doing what is expected of me."

"How can you say that, they haven't done anything to deserve what you've done to them!" Touma shouted as he approached her.

"They are dangerous creatures, and I am doing what is needed to protect everyone."

"That's insane, they may be dangerous if you mess with them, but if we leave them alone then they can become allies to the human race." Touma said as he pulled out his Digivice Burst when he say Nanami slide her device out of her sleeve.

"Change, Bio Coatl!" Nanami shoutd as pressed her hand onto her digivice and her white and yellow outfit appeared on her.

 

"Change DigiSoul, Full Charge!" Touma shouted as he summoned his digisoul and channeled it into his Digivice Burst, taking on his original digiranger form, with his second weapon, the Mach Knuckles. "Digiranger of Wind, DigiBlue!" He shouted as he struck his pose.

 

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"Touma and Masaru can be such pains." Yoshino said as she walked around the city. She was in charge of patrolling the actual city, while Masaru had the center towers, and Touma had the shore.

 

"If it isn't the flower girl." a voice called out as she walked past a building. As she turned around the largest subordinate of Kurata, Ivan, stepped out. He already had is digivice in his hand.

 

"What are you doing here?"

 

"What do you think, I'm here to do my job."

 

"You job, you call harming innocent digimon a job. That's horrible!"

 

"Digimon are dangerous creatures, and my boss wants them all exterminated for the well being of the human race."

 

"Kurata is sick, Digimon may be dangerous, but so are criminals. So by what you just said we should kill everyone who commits a crime!" Yoshino said pulling out her Digivice Burst "Change DigiSoul, Full Charge!" She shouted as she transformed into DigiPink, and summoned her Lila Shield. "Digiranger of Nature, DigiPink!"

 

"Change, BioSaurus!" Ivan shouted as he transformed into his green and orange BioSaurus form.

 

The two warriors rushed at eachother blocking each others attacks, and firing back at them.

 

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"Tornado Punch!" DigiBlue shouted as he focused wind around his Mach Knuckles and punched at BioCoatl.

 

"Freeze Wave!" Bio Coatl shouted as she fired a freezing blast at DigiBlue halting his attack by freezing his feet to the ground, and both his weapons together.

 

"TORNADO PUNCH!" he shouted as he focused more wind around the ice, and broke through it before punching the ice that held his feet to the ground. "I've had enough, its time to stop you." DigiBlue shouted as his Digisoul flared up around his body. "DigiSoul, Burst Charge!" He shouted as he transformed into Digi MirageBlue.

 

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"Needle Rain!" Bio Saurus shouted launching a swarm of blades at DigiPink, ripping through her Lila Shield and pinning her almost completely to a nearby wall. Only one of her arms was free.

 

"This is the worst!" she said as her digisoul formed around her, "DigiSoul, Burst Change!" she shouted as she managed to some how free her pinned arm, and transform into Digi RosePink.

 

"Rose Rapier!" she shouted summoning her whip and turning it into it's rapier mode.

 

"Needle Rain!" Bio Saurus said once more before jumping into the air, and letting his digivice slide into his hand once more. "Killer Change! Spino Killer!" BioSaurus shouted as he changed form, however instead of becoming his normal giant stegasaurus form, he took on the form of a large orange spinosaurus with a back covered in blades, and a green head.

 

"What, but we destroyed your transformation, how did you..."

 

"This is the latest gift from our boss."

 

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Digi MirageBlue had been tossed to the side, and now BioCoatl had her digivice out once more. "Killer Change, Lotus Killer!" She shouted as she transformed into a large female figure with a white dress, and a green lotus blossom for a head. She had a staff with two snakes wrapped around it, and a staff with multi colored crystals on it.

 

"So you got a new form, this might be a problem." MirageBlue said as he stared up at it.

 

"Touma, call on me, we can stop her together." A voice called out to MirageBlue.

 

"What, who said that?"

 

"I did master, my name is Gaomon, and I am your Digimon partner." The voice was coming from the Digivice Burst, and as the Digiranger looked at it he noticed a blue canine was in it.

 

"So I take it that the data that was damaged has finally repaired itself, I wish I could of met you sooner Gaomon, cause then maybe we wouldn't be in this situation."

 

"Just call on me, I can take a new form, and give you the power you need Master."

 

"Ok then. Gaomon, Realize! Awaken Mirage Kaiser!" MirageBlue shouted as the words floated appeared in his visor.

 

"Yes, Master!" Gaomon said as he shot out of the Digivice Burst and grew into a machine as large as Lotus Killer. Mirage Kaiser was a large machine, with a dog head, and blue armor all over, two large Mirage Claws on the hands, and a flowing cape.

 

MirageBlue lept into his new machine, and rushed at Lotus Killer.

 

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"Yoshino, my name is Lalamon, I am ready to help you. Just call on me."

 

"Uh, ok. Lalamon, Realize! Appear Rose Kaiserin!" RosePink shouted as she summoned her partner, who took the form of a large female machine, in red with a rose shaped head, a green cape, and a rose rapier on one arm, with a whip on the other.

"Rose Rapier!" RosePink shouted from with in Rose Kaiserin. The Rose Kaiserin started to attack Spino Killer with it's rapier.

"Blue Prominence!" Spino Killer shouted as a blue flame shot from it's mouth. The Rose Kaiserin quickly jumped to the side to dodge the attack.

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"Seventh Fantasia!" Lotus Killer shouted as a blast of rainbow colored energy shot from her staff at Mirage Kaiser.

"Gale Claw!" Mirage Kaiser launched forward and slashed at Lotus Killer, only for her to kick him to the ground.

"Gaomon, we need to finish this quickly!"


"Yes, Master! Full Moon..." The Mirage Kaiser said as it started to charge up energy in the chest.

"Blaster!" A large blast of energy launched from the chest, and slammed into the Lotus Killer, ripping it in half, and proceeded to rip through some rocks nearby.

Nanami fell to the ground and a digi egg appeared next to her. Tohma powered down and walked up to her, as the Mirage Kaiser became Gaomon. "Master, we should take her back to the city."

"I agree, come on Gaomon, let's go." Tohma said as he set off for Eldoradimon, walking along the shore to the area closest to Eldoradimon's head so he didn't have to swim, or jump to far.
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