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Here is the First Chapter of my Digimon fic. The later ones should be better, but I figured I'd  use some early episodes as a base for the first few chapters.

Here is the logo-Dennoujuu Sentai Digiranger(Electronic Task Force Digiranger) logo
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 EP 1-  Enter the Digirangers!


"It's too fast, I can't hit it." Masaru Daimon shouted a he continued his attempts at fighting the small fiery digimon known as PetitMeramon.

"You should really leave the fighting to the professionals." a male voice said as a figure wearing a blue uniform. This figure had a white circle with three almost rectangular shapes sticking out of it at 12 o'clock, 1 o'clock, and 11 o'clock. His boots and gloves where white, and his blue helmet had a black star shaped visor.

"Spiral Shot!" He called out as he aimed a red bow at the PetitMeramon and shot an arrow with a small tornado on it through it turning it into a DigiTama.

"Show off!" Masaru shouted as the blue figure said before he crossed his arms infront of his face, after making sure nobody was watching, and brought them down to his sides. When he did this the suit vanished and there stood Tohma H. Norstein who promptly caught the Digivice that appeared before him when he returned to normal.

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"Job well done you two." Satsuma said as they returned to the DATS building.

"I did all the work, Masaru didn't even transform." Tohma said.

"Yes, however the suits seem to be working better than expected." Satsuma said as he glanced at the information displayed on one of the large screens.

"They're a lot more efficient now that they have weapons."

"So if there aren't any more digimon to take care of I'm going to head home." Masaru said as he started out of the main room, only to be punched by Tohma.

"You act like this is a something you can just come and do when you want. You act like this is some sort of game, it's not! We have a very important job, and you don't seem to understand that." Tohma said after punching Masaru.

"You think that you're better than me just because you are a boy genius."

"At least I don't rush in swinging my fists around wildly."

"You two need to stop fighting and learn to start working as a team, otherwise eventually we'll loose thanks two you two fighting each other." Yoshino said as she tried to separate the two of them.

"Several signatures detected." Miki and Megumi said and Satsuma immediately dispatched Masaru, Tohma and Yoshino.

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When the three of them arrived on the scene they both Yoshino and Tohma pulled out their digivices and said "Digisoul Change!" The pixilated energy that formed around their hands was then channeled through the digivice, and then a bright light was released that covered their bodies. When the light died down they were waring new uniforms. Tohma had the same one that he had on earlier, and Yoshino's was a pink variation of it, with a small pink skirt attached to it, and her visor was a small flower like shape.

Somehow Masaru landed a lucky punch, and his digisoul appeared on his hand. "Digisoul Change!" He shouted and the same sequence took place. Masaru's outfit was orange with a the flame shaped visor.

"Digiranger of Fire, DigiOrange!" Masaru said as he stuck a fighting pose.

"Digiranger of Wind, DigiBlue!" Tohma said striking his pose.

"Digiranger of Nature, DigiPink!" Yoshino said as she struck her pose.

"Dennoujuu Sentai Digiranger!" they shouted in unison before engaging the enemy.

"Sun Shield!" DigiPink said as a large sunflower based shield appeared on her arm.

"Geo Guantlet!" DigiOrange called out as a armored glove like weapon, resembling the top section of a dinosaurs head, appeard on his right hand.

"Gaoga Bow!" DigiBlue said as a scarf appeared in his hand then took the form of a bow.

"Spiral Shot!" Digiblue said as he fired an arrow of wind at the PetitMeramon.

"Sun Beam!" Digipink said as her shield started to glow, before it let out a blast of energy that it absorbed from the sun.

"Impulse Fist!" DigiOrange shouted as he ran towards the PetitMeramon and punched slammed the Geo Gauntlet into them with all of his might, created several Digitamas in a very short time.

"I'm surprised he didn't use his Flame Fist." DigiBlue said as he fired a few more shots.

"That would of been the worst." DigiPink said as she blocked a couple attacks, and fired back.

"They look like they're planning on retreating." DigiOrange said as all of the PetitMeramon started to group together.

"I don't think that's the case, it looks like they plan on merging."

"Into what, a giant PetitMeramon?"

"No into Meramon." DigiPink said as the group turned to see that the PetitMeramon had formed one large Meramon.

"That's a bit on the big side, Yoshino." DigiOrange said as he stared at the large figure before him.

"This is the worst." DigiPink commented also staring at the giant Meramon before them.

"Masaru, you three shouldn't have a problem if you call on the Savers. With the Savers you should have enough power to take out Meramon, but you need to work as a team." Satsuma's voice said to via the communication system within the helmet.

"Guys, Satsuma said to call the Savers. Do you know what he's talking about?"

"Masaru you aren't a good listener are you, the Savers are another thing that was programmed into the Digivice. However it we don't know exactly how to access everything. We just recently figured out how to access the weapons. Apparently they also figured out the command to call the Savers."

"So how are we supposed to call them?"

"If you would pay attention they'd probably send you the command." DigiPink said as she glanced at her visor's display. The words Sun Saver, Realize were scrolling across the visor, and flashing. "Sun Saver, Realize!" she called out as she raised one arm, and a pink light shot skyward. Suddenly she turned to notice a large machine, that resembled a cross between a sunflower and a lizard flew towards them.

"Gaoga Saver, Realize!" DigiBlue said as he followed his teammate's example, and a blue light shot from his hand into the sky before arching to the road where it opened a digital gate, surrounded by what looked like his Digisoul. Out of this gate came a large blue malamute, with a pair of red armor on its front paws, and what resembled a red scarf around its neck.

"Geo Saver, Realize!" DigiOrange said as he followed the example of the other two, this time though the light shot into the ocean, and from the water came a large orange mechanical dinosaur, with a larger version of the Geo Gauntlet on his head. All three of them quickly jumped into their respective machines, and when they got in they noticed a light on flashing, that read King Formation.

"King Formation!" All three of them said as they pressed the button and the three Savers started to change. The Geo Saver became the legs and body, with its head forming the chestplate. The Gaoga Saver became the right arm with it's scarf forming tow arm mounted blades. The Sun saver became the left arm, with the sunflower opening to reveal the hand, and the leaf wings became an arm mounted shield. The head of the Gaoga Saver detached and formed the helmet of the King Saver.

"King Saver, formation complete!" the three Digirangers said in unison.

"Let's hurry up and take care of him before anyone gets hurt." DigiOrange said two his two teammates.

"Right, Gaoga blades ready!" DigiBlue said as the blades on the right arm flipped into a forward position.

"Sunshine Beam!" DigiPink called out as the left hand retracted, allowing the sunflower to be full, when this happened it started to glow, and then let out a beam of energy straight at Meramon.

"Gaoga Slash!" DigiBlue called out from within the cockpit of the King Saver, as the right arm came down and slashed Meramon twice, forming an X. After this the King Saver turned around and Meramon exploded, leaving behind a few DigiTamas.

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"Nice work out there."

"Thank you sir, but unless you sent us the information about the Savers we wouldn't of been able to beat Meramon, he was just to big.

"Yes, however I don't know how often you'll need to use the Savers, but at least they will be on stand by so you can use them if needed."

"They've only scratched the surface of the King Saver's ability today." Miki said from her computer.

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Wow, very nice start for a Sentai Team.  It´s however PetitMeramon, not PicoMeramon.

I guess the King Saver is more or less based on "Mechas" like GaoHunter and AbarenoOh , right ?

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K thanks for pointing that out I'll go fix that little part about the PetitMeramon. And yes I did get the idea for the formation of the King Saver from from the Abaren Oh, and GaoHunter. I actually looked at the Abaren Oh as a base sicne that was the only 3 part mecha that I could think of when I was working out the King Saver. Well I did think of the Hurricanger mech, but I didn't think that would work to well.

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Yes, AbarenoOh and GaoHunter were definately a better choice than Senpuujin.

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I agree. I never really liked it one zord hardly made anything of the megazord. Ptera was only to make the DT megazord look better. And was for one attack. The dolphin was hardly useful. The lion made most of it. But that sound ok. But fic is ok though. Nice work.

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Thanks UnkownNeo, I'll be working on the second chapter today, and it should be up sometime tomorrow. I just have to come up with an early episode to use as a base for it. They should start getting better when I introduce the "Main" villians of the series, which anyone who watched savers probably know what they will be.

Edit: I put a link to the Logo for the fic in my art thread, and added one to the first chapter.

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This is awesome. 

Keep up the good work, I want to see more~

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Well here is the second chapter/episode. I don't feel that it is as good as the first, but like I said earlier, as soon as I start straying slightly from the first part of the series they should start to get better. I just need to come up with some decent digimon to use for the future chapters.

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Ep 2: Drimogemon strikes, Digirangers move out!

"Get back here!" Masaru shouted as he leaped at a Numemon who was trying to get a away. Right as he did this Tohma had also had went to stop the small digimon, causing them to collide. However Yoshino, who had already thought ahead, and transformed into DigiPink, used her Sun Shield  to blast the small Digimon, causing it to revert to a DigiTama

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"Nice job, though the number of Digimon that have been showing up has begun to increase, you three haven't let that slow you any. You've been promptly defeating them so we could send them back. However the number of Digimon that have realized lately is beginning to bug me."

"Yes, the number of Digimon related incidents has increased dramatically lately. What's really unnerving is the fact that I have no clue why this is." Tohma said as Yoshino, Masaru and himself gave sat in the debriefing.
 
"Yoshino, what are your concerns on the matter?"

"Right now my main concern is the current lack of team work."

"Well since we're done here, Tohma, why don't you go a head and give Masaru a ride home."

"But..."

"If I have to I'll make it an order."

"Yes sir!" Tohma said as he gave in.

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When Tohma and Masaru arrived at Masaru's house he was introduced to Masaru's family, and Sayuri invited him to come in for tea, but Tohma decided not to and rode off.

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Later that night a pair of bank robbers broke into a bank, and wound up getting locked in. However when they accidentally got locked in a portal opened up and a large mole Digimon, Drimogemon, appeared out of it. The Drimogemon proceeded to drill his way out of the bank, and the robbers decided that he could help him with their robbery.

However as soon as they got to the money, Masaru, Tohma, and Yoshino showed up. The two skilled DATS Members quickly pulled out their Digivices and shouted "Digisoul Change!" transforming into DigiPink and DigiBlue respectively. Masaru, being the least skilled, when it came to his digisoul, and pretty much everything else other than street fighting, charged the large Digimon. He leaped into the air, and landed his punch on Drimogemon before being knocked away.

"Digisoul Change!" Masaru called out as he transformed into Digi Orange.

"Digiranger of Fire, DigiOrange!" Masaru said as he stuck a fighting pose.

"Digiranger of Wind, DigiBlue!" Tohma said striking his pose.

"Digiranger of Nature, DigiPink!" Yoshino said as she struck her pose.

"Dennoujuu Sentai Digiranger!" they shouted in unison before engaging the enemy.

"What do they think they're doing?" One of the two bank robbers said as he stared at their hilarious poses.

"Geo Gauntlet!" DigiOrange called out as he summoned his weapon. "Burst Fist!" he called out as his Geo Gauntlet was suddenly covered in flames and he slammed it down into Drimogemon's back.
 
"You should really leave the fights to us. Spiral Shot!" DigiBlue said having already summoning his Gao Bow, he fired one of his wind arrows directly at the large mole, who burrowed underground to avoid it.

"Leave it to you, you missed!"

"Sun Beam!" DigiPink called out as she noticed Drimogemon begin to surface. Her blast hit him right in the face causing him to head straight for the three of them with rage.

"At least he didn't go under when I attacked him!" DigiOrange said as he jumped to the side, "Flame Fist!" he called out as the Geo Gauntlet opened up and shot a stream of fire at Drimogemon when he surfaced. DigiOrange had shot several Spiral Shots, at him, and DigiPink had fired another Sun Beam, all three attacks collided with devastating force.

When the smoke died down, what they expected to see was a DigiTama. However instead from the ground rose a large Digmon.

"Since when do Digimon turn into other Digimon when we defeat them?"

"Probably when the evolve, in one way or another at the right time" DigiBlue commented at the gigantic Digimon before them.

"Though this, Digimon becoming giant, stuff isn't normal." DigiPink Commented as the three of them glanced at each other and nodded. Once again they called on their Savers, and formed the King Saver. However his time the King Saver held a large double bladed weapon formed from the tails of the Geo Saver, and Sun Saver.

After an intense fight which mainly invovled them trying to avoid Digmon's Gold Rush, and Big Crack attacks. They barely landed a single hit on him the entire time.

"Lets take that gigantic bug down!"

"Right, Sunshine Beam!" DigiPink Called out as the KingSaver's left hand retracted to allow the solar weapon to form. When the attack fired it was able to distract him, allowing them to follow through with their finishing technique.

"King Slash!" The three Digirangers shouted as the King Saver brought down the large bladed weapon and sliced Digmon twice with it, in an X formation. When the King Saver turned after the attack, Digmon exploded, leaving behind a DigiTama.

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"Job well done, I'm beginning to expect nothing less of your three." Satsuma said as they reported in with the DigiTama.

"Sir, I already went ahead and took care of the witnesses. I removed the past half an hour or so from their memory, so they only remember breaking into the bank." Tohma said as he sat down.

"Good job, we certainly don't need bank robbers saying that their partner was a large mole who could drill through walls. They'd get tossed in the mental institution, but the more people that started talking about Digimon, the harder our job would be."

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Nice ! Good for brigning more Yoshino Action, but the Team work part of Touma and Masaru has to be improved. I guess that will happen in one of the next Chapters.

Keep on your great work !

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Well here is the third part. Its not as great as I hoped it would be, I was 3/4 done when I noticed that maybe it should be chapter four. But I didn't feel like trying to come up with something else for the third chapter so I guess this is where it starts to drift from the Savers order of events.


EP 3- Friend or Foe? The Stealthy DigiPurple Appears!

"I'm glad to see that you aren't fighting right now." Satsuma said as he entered the briefing room.

"So what Digimon are we after today?" Masaru asked a bit sarcastically.

"None, I'm sending the three of you on a reconnaissance mission. This means you'll be gone for a couple days at least."

"So where are we going?" Yoshino asked, not really looking forward to looking forward to the mission.

"The Digital World."

"What, the Digital Dive hasn't been tested on humans before has it, how can you even think of sending us to the Digital World!" Yoshino said surprised at the destination.
 
"Even though the Digital Dive hasn't been used on humans before, I believe humans have gone to the Digital World before, and made it back safely. If this wasn't true then there is no way Commander Satsuma would send us to the Digital World." Tohma said as he toyed around with a small laptop.
 
"Tohma is correct. You won't be the first to go to the Digital World, and I hope that you won't be the last. However we need to see if we can find some reason to why Digimon have been Realizing with in our world."

"So when do we go?" Masaru asked looking forward to possibly having a good fight.

"In just a couple hours. The supplies are being prepped for transport right now, then we'll have to make sure everything is properly calibrated to open a gate stable enough to convert and transport you."

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A few hours after the briefing the three DigiRangers were gathered in a room on a small round pad. Miki and Megumi were at the computers working on something as the chamber that Masaru, Tohma, and Yoshino were in started to light up and next thing they knew they were falling through what resembled a large tunnel with data flowing all around them.

"What's going on?" Masaru asked.

"We are on our way to the Digital World, it shouldn't be much longer. According to Satsuma the transportation shouldn't take long." Tohma said before a light appeared at the end of the tunnel and the three of them fell out of the sky and landed in a meadow by a river. There were rocks just floating in the sky, and the sky had a a circuit board like design throughout it.

"This place is interesting." Masaru said as he glanced at the water which looked slightly pixilated.

"Sir, I don't see the supplies anywhere near by." Yoshino said while the connection that the tunnel provided was still active.

"Then they shouldn't be far. I'm sure Tohma can calculate the general area in which they landed." Satsuma's voice said before the tunnel closed.

"So where are we headed Tohma?" Masaru asked as he looked around, there was pretty much nothing except a near by forest an the meadow as far as he could see.

"Well it is likely that the supplies landed in that forest since it is with in the margin of error for the landing spot." Tohma said and the three of them headed towards the forest. However upon entering the forest they found several shurikens flying at them from somewhere in the tree tops.

"Looks like someone wants a fight." Masaru said as he made a fist and started to look around to see if he could spot the attacking Digimon. However the enemy was hiding in the trees, attacking stealthily.

"I'm not sure if its one or several. If its one, then the enemy is jumping from tree to tree with great speed and accuracy for us to not be able to notice." Tohma said as he pulled out his Digivice, with Yoshino quickly doing the same. However right as they were getting ready to transform a boomerang shot from a tree and knocked the Digivices from both of their hands before returning to the tree tops.

"What are you doing here!" a voice called out from the trees.

"We're looking for our stuff." Masaru said with his hand still in a fist.

"Well you won't find it here!"

"We're just looking, I'm sure that isn't going to be a problem." Tohma said as he stared at the tree tops.

"You aren't welcome here humans. Just head leave this world and never return!"

"We can't with out our stuff, plus we're not planning on causing any trouble. We mean no harm at all!" Yoshino said calmly.

"You human, humans are bad!" the voice said before it jumped into view. The figure wore an outfit similar the uniform of the Digirangers. Except his was purple, and had a black vest on, covering the part where the DATS logo is on the others. His visor was similar to that of DigiBlue's visor.

"You look pretty human to us, especially with that outfit on." Masaru said staring at the figure.

"I not human! Leave Jureimon's forest immediately, or else! I will not let you hurt Jureimon!"

"This kid doesn't want to listen to us, he doesn't seem to want to believe that he's human. Do you think that some Digimon brainwashed him or something?"

"No, maybe he isn't human, maybe he is a Digimon." Tohma said.

"Of course he's human, look at what he is wearing!" Masaru shouted.

"I not Human!"

"Fine, your not human, but we don't want to hurt anyone, were just trying to find our stuff. We just wanted to visit this world that's all." Yoshino said as she grabbed her and Tohma's Digivices and put them away.

"I promise we won't hurt Jureimon, here we'll let you hold onto these for us." Tohma said as he grabbed Masaru's Digivice from him and held it out to their attacker. Masaru threw his fist at Tohma for this and, Yoshino figured out his plan and tossed their Digivices to the other Digiranger as well.

 "We'll need our stuff to return home, and with out those we have no way hurting anything." Tohma said as he looked around the general area.

"You didn't come here just to visit did you? I know you came for a different reasons. If you promise to leave my forest now, then I will allow you to have your stuff back, if you choose not to accept my offer, than what happens to you is none of my concern." A large Digimon resembling a cherry tree said as it entered the area they were in.

"So you must be Jureimon, nice to meet you. We actually came to see if we could find out why so many Digimon have been attacking our world, you wouldn't happen to know why would you?" Yoshino asked

"I do not know why Digimon would be attacking your world. I only keep an eye on my forest, the rest of the Digital World is out of my jurisdiction, so I don't have an answer for you. What do you say about my offer though?"

"I guess we'll accept, after all it doesn't look like we have much of a choice. We can't transform right now, so we can't put up a fight, and we need our supplies to notify our commander and let him know that we are ready to return." Tohma said, as he glanced at Masaru who looked like he was ready to punch Jureimon just to summon his Digisoul, not that it would be to useful with out his Digivice.
 
"Hey what about that kid, he's coming with us right?" Masaru asked as he stared at the opponent.

"His home is here, in this world, but he is not under my jurisdiction, I can not make him go where he does not wish to."

"But..."

"We understand." Tohma said cutting off Masaru.

"Ok, please take them to what they want and wait for them to make contact then you can give them their device back."

"Are you sure Jureimon, after all they are humans."

"I understand that they are humans, but they didn't attack so we owe them  the benefit of the doubt. Plus this is my forest, so I am the one in charge of it. Fighting with them would only endanger the young ones." Jureimon said as he moved one of his hands to point to some Nyokimon in the bushes.

"Understood!" the purple Digiranger said as he led the others to another clearing and they made contact. "Go, and don't return!" he said as he tossed them their Digivices. As soon as they left he destroyed the equipment with his boomerang and walked off.

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Seems like your Version is Ikuto is a bit easier to talk with.

Keep on the good work.

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Well one of the things I have trouble with is keeping characters in character. I try to keep them in character but usually I fail with at least one character somewhere along the way. But that, and descriptions, seem to be my week spots in my stories but I try my best to overcome it.

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Read the first chapter so far. Weird concept, but somehow it just manages to work. This gets my Seal of Approval. Congratulations.

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Thanks, I don't really know why I came up with the idea for this fic, though it did start with two others I did on another forum, Power Rangers DUO, and Cyber Sentai Beastranger, two Rockman.EXE based powerangers/Sentai fics. Those came from people calling a group of characters the Cross Fusion Rangers. I guess this fic spawned from people talking about how Savers and Dekaranger/SPD are similar. So I guess thats where I got the idea. I should have the fourth chapter done soon.

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Yeah it's not so bad. Interesting idea. Ikuto in this should be pretty interesting.